You did a fantastic job describing what it would feel like if you were on the moon. I love how you incorporated rhyme, similes, and adjectives. Looks like you're an up-and-coming writer in the making!
Had you thought about using an image or art to paint a picture for what you're describing? I think this would be a great addition! :)
I have often thought about what it would be like to travel into space. I think if I had the opportunity to go there, I would probably stay because I'd miss my friends and family so much! Niel Armstrong was so brave going to the moon.
If you had the opportunity, would you go to the moon? I think the view would be phenomenal!
Kia ora Michelle,
ReplyDeleteYou did a fantastic job describing what it would feel like if you were on the moon. I love how you incorporated rhyme, similes, and adjectives. Looks like you're an up-and-coming writer in the making!
Had you thought about using an image or art to paint a picture for what you're describing? I think this would be a great addition! :)
I have often thought about what it would be like to travel into space. I think if I had the opportunity to go there, I would probably stay because I'd miss my friends and family so much! Niel Armstrong was so brave going to the moon.
If you had the opportunity, would you go to the moon? I think the view would be phenomenal!
Noho ora mai
Erica