Michelle
Date: Tuesday 23 October 2018
Title: Marshmallow
1.
- River
- Trees
- Forest
- Marshmallow
- Stones
2.
- The river flowed along the trees.
The cold, fast flowing river flowed like a cheetah running along the trees that grew in a forest.
- The marshmallow melted.
The warm, soft and creamy marshmallow that flew fast in the air like a dragon fly along the campfire.
- The Tree leaves were whirling around the branches.
The slow leaves flew in the campfire and were burnt like a slow slog it took 5 days to be burnt.
- The stones shimmered from the campfire.
The cold, round stone stood up on the grass still like a wood frog along the trees that screeched loudly.
- The Forest has made loads of noises.
The breezy, cold forest blew a gust of wind to the forest like a dragon around the forest the forest shooked.
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