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Friday 29 March 2019

Narrative 28/03/19

Michelle
Date: Wednesday 27 March 2019
Title: Narrative writing
Subtitle: How does the world end


I always had this disturbing thought in my head, how does the world end? Well it all started yesterday when I saw a shooting star, not thinking before I act I was wishing that my life would be better without my families commotion and the outside commotion, well I regret that now and I am crying my heart out for them.


It was a saturday morning and I couldn’t wait to sleep in. Beep, Beep, Beep, wait of course, I couldn’t I shared an enormous room that could fit at least 3 people and I hate it. My 2 sisters who were twins are 5 years older than me and I’m the middle child.
I’ve been sharing my room with them since my elder brother left home with his wife and he has an 8 and 7 year old daughter.
My twins sisters would have a netball game every saturday morning and they leave at 8:30 till 1:20, so they always make a huge fuss about it because it’s their future,
But yeah this occurs every saturday morning as usual.  


As my ears hear silence I continue to sleep in, but then my sister ( 14 ) and my brother ( 15 ) entered the room and ruined it, I turned to them and yell in outraged scream which would probably be clearer for my grandma to hear. They both looked at me and started to laugh like it was the most funniest thing in the world. I ran out the room and smashed my mums garden pot, my mom rushed up stairs and yelled in horror, “ did you do this.” “ yes” giving a smart look, she looked astonished and said “you’re grounded.” I had no problem being grounded I was so proud spending some time on my own, not hearing every single word my family says.


I turned to my room and entered it not thinking of apologizing, after 2 hours being a prisoner in my room, I felt mean and starving in the same time I waited for night to strike so I could secretly get something to eat. As my house got quieter and quieter I ran down stairs which made creepy noises, as I arrived in the kitchen my little mischievous brother came trotting like a horse and accidently smashed his bowl of ice cream, I turned to him until he vanished to his room. Mum appeared at sight and said “ what did you do” she said in a whiny voice, “I didn’t do it, it was,” before I could say who it was my mum said “ don’t blame anyone else, go to your room.” I could tell my mum was really upset I didn’t want to argue with her so I dragged myself up stairs.


I plunged to my bed and cried for hunger, “ my family doesn’t even care about me” I looked out my window shivering I went to close it until a gleaming sight flashed It was very attracted that I forgot I was cold. It took me 5 seconds to notice it was a shooting star, I closed my eyes and wished. As I opened my eyes I was so tired my tam trum tired me out hoping my wish would come true. The next morning it was so quiet that I woke up till 12:00, I was in a good mood, and there was no line for the bathroom and my room was spotless which made me curious. I went down stairs hoping mum makes chocolate muffin, she makes chocolate muffin every sunday morning if she’s in a good mood. As I crashed into a pile of pillows I noticed the house was clean and there were no running kids around. Did they leave without me, I ran to the window and the car was still there, where is everyone, I must be home alone I ran to the freezer and grabbed the ice cream, whip cream and the chocolate sauce no time for a bowl I said to myself I smashed the food onto my face, which made me feel stuffed.

I couldn’t believe my wish came true, I turned the t.v and it was the news but there were no one conducting it which made me shiver, I put on a jacket and head outside for a walk, there were no cars passing me and to be honest it is a busy road there and were no people walking or riding bikes, I ran to the shop and it was closed, I sat on the bench and thought, what if my home alone turned into the last person on earth,  what if I have no food left I can't just steal food from the shop, the wind whispered through my ears. I headed back home and sat on the couch I should be more careful wishing next time but what if there is no next time, as I’m the last person on earth. Wow a 12 year old girl ruling the world on her own, turns out this is how the world ends.

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